Cock?
Dick? Penis? What is it?
BLMorticia
Greetings
friends! Your
wicked gal is back with a post about cock…or is it dick…or penis? Have I got
your attention yet?
*grins*
Good.
Okay so, what do YOU call it? When your hands touch yours or someone else’s you
might say, dick or cock. Do you say the clinical word of penis? How about the
word phallus? Oh and then the hard plastic thing you play with. What do you
call that? A dong? A penis? A hard plastic cock? Who knows!
This
conversation recently came up in the Facebook group I belong to with bunches of
other erotica romance writers and fans, specifically fellow Red Lipstick
Diaries author, Kharisma Rhayne. She mentioned how she overused the word cock
in her WIPs I believe. I said it was okay to overuse the word because some of
the other names for it don’t hold the same appeal. I mean, dick? It’s a name
right? Short for Richard and when you’re talking about cock or dick you really
don’t want to mention the length in the same sentence. I digress, I’ve used it
though so moving along. *laughs*
How
about member?
ACK!
Member of what? Oh my God. I’ve seen it in books and I just cringe when I see
it. It doesn’t take away my love for any story when I do read the word but I
might twitch my nose or shrug a little.
How
about phallus? I like the word but that too seems a little scientific. When I’ve
mentioned the word it’s usually talking about a toy. *laughs*
How
about manhood? I’ve used that. One of my editors doesn’t like that word either
but I find that adequately describes a part of the male anatomy. I know Michael uses that a lot. *grins* He feels more
comfortable with that than the word cock.
Lastly,
the penis word. Umm, that’s the scientific term and usually the one we heard in
health class in high school. When we did, everyone snickered, especially when
our middle aged teacher said it. You as a parent might’ve used it when talking
to your kids about sex. The penis goes into the ladies vagina… Oh boy. Did you
turn red and feel embarrassed? Ask Sharita about that one when talking to her
son. My point, I suppose in those situations, it’s perfectly fine but in
erotica writing? Ummm…
*sighs*
I
know I’ve struck a few chords with any erotica or romance writers out there
reading this post. BL, what the hell do I say then? We’re taught not to use the
same word twice!
So
very true and that’s why I’ve deferred to some of my favorites that don’t
include the ones that make me cringe.
Sword?
Well, I rarely use that but it is an alternative. How about rod? Yep, I believe
I’ve used that as well. It doesn’t sound too bad does it? She stroked his rod
while their tongues tangled in a hot embrace. Okay, not too bad. Better than
dick hmm?
Hardened
muscle? All of us muses use that a lot. I mean, one of my editors said the cock
isn’t a muscle but my argument is it swells when there’s pressure right? Kind
of like your back or arm muscles when you exercise them? *laughs* So, I use
that.
More?
Length or spear. Okay, I haven’t really used that latter one. Hard flesh? More
of a Michaelism, Michael Mandrake that is, since he’s so damn proper. Whatever
we call it, it’s yummy and we erotic writers try our best to be unique and get
our point across with whatever we use.
So
writers take those suggestions and run with them. Readers, now you know our
secrets and the dilemmas we go through to be different. Want more words? Check
out this sex dictionary. Even some of these I’d never use because they made me
cringe but for kicks have a look. http://www.sex-lexis.com/Sex-Dictionary/penis
Hope
you’ve enjoyed this post about cock, penis, length… Whatever you call it, I
hope it’s doing the job! *grins*
Officer
Vanessa Daniels is fast approaching her 35th birthday which also happens to be
on Valentine’s day. She seeks a specific kind of man to be her lover and likes
being the one in the driver’s seat.
Jayson
Freed is a bartender by day and a writer by night. He’s looking to find the
right woman to help fulfill some of his inner most fantasies. The two meet on
an internet dating site and immediately start talking. Will the connection
work? Will Jayson turn out to be just what this hard nose girl needs?
I
turned to face him and nodded. I had to agree and when you write as good as he
does you need to be thinking clearly. “Well, I’d say you’re right Sir. You’re
an awesome author so your logic is correct.”
“Well
thank you, Vanessa.” Jayson flashed the wicked smile and I swear I melted on
the spot. He cradled my chin in his palm. Our lips connected and tongues
tangled sending a rush of heat between my thighs. The adrenaline traveled to
all parts of my body making my nipples harden and my clit tingle. God this man
had such an effect on me even in this short period of time. He dragged his hand
over my leg, slowly hiking my skirt up while toying with the top of my thigh
high stockings. I bit my lip and lay back while spreading my legs so he could
get a better angle.
“You’re
so beautiful, Vanessa. I’ve wanted to do this for a while.” He caressed my
ankles while removing my heels. Jayson pressed his lips on the soles of my feet
and traced parts with his tongue making this cop’s undies wet with my juices.
“I can sense your arousal, Vanessa.” His throaty whisper caused my nipples to
harden. As he pressed his finger against my clit, I closed my eyes, waiting for
him to take over. The continuous thrusts from his long digits made me lose my
breath and focus. In haste, I pulled my dress up over my head.
“Jayson,
damnit.” My hands toyed with his brown strands as he continued his affections.
A soft moan escaped my lips while he enjoyed the tastes of my sweet nectar
through the silky material. Once he pulled my panties down, he swirled his
tongue on my labia, giving it a quick suck, while toying with the small gold
ring. Jayson penetrated me with his fingers and moved them around. Reacting to
his moves, I squirmed and tugged his hair harder. “God yes!”
“The
taste of you can make a man drunk with lust, Vanessa.” His three digits
remained inside my hot pocket, probing and prodding me. Damn I want his cock
inside of me.
“You
wanna feel me don’t you?”
Jayson
slowly removed his fingers from my moist sex. Hating the empty feeling, I
whimpered, lifted my lids, and watched my hot man removing his shirt, revealing
a gorgeous milky white chest with ripples in all the right places. His abdomen,
not six pack but toned; a tattoo on his left breast and one leading from his
navel to somewhere below his waistband that I couldn’t see just yet. Ogling
him, I bit my lip and pinched my nips through my bra while he slid his slacks
from his slim waist. “Wow.” I really enjoyed this small strip show. The man
should be on the cover of magazines and letting everyone know how successful a
beautiful man can be writing erotica, not hidden away. Too gorgeous!
“I
could say the same about you, Vanessa. Why don’t I help you with that bra? I
wanna see your luscious breasts and suck those nipples that resemble chocolate
kisses.” His smile so was wicked it made me spurt on the spot.
Hope
his couch has stain guard.
Jayson
finished undressing then grabbed a condom from his wallet. “You wanna do the
honors love?”
I
nodded yes and agreed to the task. The lovely sight in front of me didn’t allow
me to form words. I moved slightly to meet the head of his cock. Slowly I
licked around it, enjoying the taste of pre-cum from the small slit. Jayson’s
hardened muscle not huge but from what he lacked in length he made up for in
girth; a beautiful vessel I couldn’t wait to have inside me. What did I say
about control? Fuck that noise for now. I wanted this man in the worst way and
I’d be sure to satisfy the need to be Miss Boss later.
As
I fondled and sucked those delicious jewels between his legs, I slipped on the
latex. Jayson’s skin tasted tangy and sweet. The moans coming from him, so damn
sexy, I could feel my pussy throbbing with each sound of his voice.
“Mhmm,
Vanessa.” Jayson’s strong hand, gently tugged on my black curls. How did he
know I loved my hair pulled? Oh yeah, I probably told him when we had phone
sex. Still delighting in the tastes of his cock, I gazed up at my hot new man,
waiting for his next command. His hazels met my gaze while he lightly pushed me
down onto the couch. “I would carry you to the bedroom but, damn I can’t wait
any longer.” Quickly, he slid my moist underwear from my ankles and tossed them
aside.
I
didn’t disagree. No more waiting, damnit. Him inside of this pussy is what I
needed and craved. Within seconds, he hovered over me with the head of that
gorgeous specimen nudging its way between my wet folds. One small push and I gasped,
digging my nails into his shoulders. Fuck, it had been awhile. He’d need to
shove a little harder. Almost instinctively, he did and it broke the barrier as
if I were being deflowered again. Jayson started with a slow rhythm,
penetrating me while nuzzling the space between my breasts. He used his teeth
to lift my bra and I assisted him with it by removing it completely.
Immediately, he pushed harder while licking the beads of sweat on my brown
flesh. My fingers entangled in his brown locks. I wrapped my legs around his
waist, meeting his thrusts.
“Damn.”
I grit my teeth and pierced him with my fingertips. The pressure built in my
abdomen. I needed to come so much sooner than later. He circled my areolas and
traced them with the tip of his tongue.
“Vanessa,
ooh shii…you feel amazing. Just hold on a little longer baby.” Jayson nuzzled
my skin so more.
I
braced myself as he asked and clenched my thighs together while I pressed into
him. Lightly I bit his shoulder, tasting that milky flesh, the mixture of sweat
and cologne excited my taste buds. The adrenaline flowed through me, nipples
tensing with every suck, I couldn’t hold on anymore I needed to come. “Ungh,
Jayson!”
“Yeah,
I’m there with you baby,” he breathed and pressed his lips on top of mine. We
moaned into each other’s embrace and in moments I felt the latex expand inside
of me.
Again,
I breathed in, clamping my pelvic muscles against his stiff cock. “Jesus!” While
the trembles took over me, I engulfed his mouth and delighted in his kisses.
Finally,
I’m in heaven with my new man where I’d dreamed of being. What could be more
perfect than this?
BLMorticia
is currently a published writer with Rebel
Ink and Naughty Nights Press.
Her first two novellas, My Lieutenant and Something Fresh Served Hot are Silver
stars on All Romance Ebooks. She writes bi weekly for Red Lipstick Diaries and a
column twice a month on Blak
Rayne Books. For more info, please visit, Erotica With Snark
I have to admit any book loses me by being too creative with the word. Cock and dick, stick with the classics. Manhood*cringe*. Worst one ever.
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