Cock? Dick?
Penis? What is it?
BLMorticia
Greetings
friends!
Your wicked
gal is back with a post about cock…or is it dick…or penis? Have I got your
attention yet?
*grins*
Good. Okay
so, what do YOU call it? When your hands touch yours or someone else’s you
might say, dick or cock. Do you say the clinical word of penis? How about the
word phallus? Oh and then the hard plastic thing you play with. What do you
call that? A dong? A penis? A hard plastic cock? Who knows!
This
conversation recently came up in the Facebook group I belong to with bunches of
other erotica romance writers and fans, specifically fellow Rebel Ink author,
Kharisma Rayne. She mentioned how she had overused the word cock in her WIPs I
believe and I mentioned that I thought it was okay to overuse the word because
some of the other names for it don’t hold the same appeal. I mean, dick? It’s a
name right? Short for Richard and when you’re talking about cock or dick you
really don’t want to mention the length in the same sentence. I digress, I’ve
used it though so moving along. *laughs*
How about
member?
ACK! Member
of what? Oh my God. I’ve seen it in books and I just cringe when I see it. It
doesn’t take away my love for any story when I do read the word but I might
twitch my nose or shrug a little.
How about
phallus? I like the word but that too seems a little scientific. When I’ve
mentioned the word it’s usually talking about a toy. *laughs*
How about
manhood? I’ve used that. One of my editors doesn’t like that word either but I
find that adequately describes a part of the male anatomy. I know Michael uses that a lot. *grins* He feels more
comfortable with that than the word cock.
Lastly, the
penis word. Umm, that’s the scientific term and usually the one we heard in
health class in high school. When we did, everyone snickered, especially when
our middle aged teacher said it. You as a parent might’ve used it when talking
to your kids about sex. The penis goes into the ladies vagina… Oh boy. Did you
turn red and feel embarrassed? Ask Sharita about that one when talking to her
son. My point, I suppose in those situations, it’s perfectly fine but in
erotica writing? Ummm…
*sighs*
I know I’ve
struck a few chords with any erotica or romance writers out there reading this
post. BL, what the hell do I say then? We’re taught not to use the same word
twice!
Sword? Well,
I rarely use that but it is an alternative. How about rod? Yep, I believe I’ve
used that as well. It doesn’t sound too bad does it? She stroked his rod while
their tongues tangled in a hot embrace. Okay, not too bad. Better than dick
hmm?
Hardened
muscle? All of us muses use that a lot. I mean, one of my editors said the cock
isn’t a muscle but my argument is it swells when there’s pressure right? Kind
of like your back or arm muscles when you exercise them? *laughs* So, I use
that.
More? Length
or spear. Okay, I haven’t really used that latter one. Hard flesh? More of a
Michaelism, Michael Mandrake that is, since he’s so damn proper. Whatever we
call it, it’s yummy and we erotic writers try our best to be unique and get our
point across with whatever we use.
So writers take
those suggestions and run with them. Readers, no you know our secrets and the
dilemmas we go through to be different. Want more words? Check out this sex dictionary.
Even some of these I’d never use because they made me cringe but for kicks have
a look. Sex-Lexis.com
Hope you’ve
enjoyed this post. Let me give you an example of what I’ve done when writing a
sex scene. Thanks for listening to me as always.
BIO:
BLMorticia considers herself the snarky and wicked side of author Sharita Lira
so expect her to tap into the taboo and unleash her fantasies on the world
through her words. When not writing, she does biweekly posts at fellow author
Blak Rayne’s blog, BRB Blog,
posts with Rawiya at Erotic Diaries
and a feature with fellow Rebel Cassandre Dayne called the Wicked Women
Wednesdays.
For
more information, please visit http://www.thelitriad.com
and to ask any questions, email srlmort71@gmail.com
Official
Blurb:
Nathan Ellerby's
apartment has been ransacked by his ex who didn't like the fact Nathan dumped
him. Trouncing through the debris uttering a string of obscenities, Nathan's
shocked to see Lieutenant Bryant Duncan at his door claiming he's already
caught the offender. Sensing an instant connection, when Nathan finds out
Bryant's divorced and he's straddling the fence between being gay or bisexual,
Nathan finds himself in a quandary.
Although
the Lieutenant does everything in his power to prove to Nathan he's worthy,
Nathan is afraid to lower his defenses which leaves both men wondering if
Nathan will allow love into his life even through his doubts.
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“Nathan…” he called my name, taking my hand inside his.
“Can’t you let me in? Stop building that wall between us. I want this Nathan
Ellerby. Give me a chance.” Bryant took his free hand, running his fingers
through my long hair.
I moved my head slightly to look into those dark, brown
irises again. We leaned into each other, and within moments, my lips were on
top of his. His hands roamed my skin, pinching, teasing my nipples. They became
taut under his touch. From there, one hand moved to my crotch. My cock immediately
took notice. I reached out to him and he continued fondling me. I slipped my
hand to the space between his legs. “Damn Lieutenant,” I growled rubbing his
erection through his pants.
“Hmm?” Bryant smiled, combing my long strands.
I moved in closer, rubbing my head against his chin. His
breaths turned into pants. I swore I could feel myself spurting again.
Both of us were breathing heavily, staring at one another
with our hands on each others’ cocks.
“No wonder you were in command. You really know how to
strategize don’t you?” I began helping him take off his fitted tee shirt. Once
I had it off, I moved closer, licking around the edge of his nipple before
biting it.
“Oohhh…yes,” he exhaled. I continued going down the center
of his chest to his navel. “I was…pretty good at it, too. My attack methods
weren’t so bad either.” Lightly, he pushed me to sit upright so he could unzip
his slacks. He slipped them from his waist before reaching down, pulling them
off his ankles.
Fuck!
Once again, my mouth felt like the desert. He was truly
breathtaking. His body was like the sculptures I’d admired in some famous art
galleries. I gasped at the sight of his erection, enjoying the steady amount of
precum, dripping from the tip. His manly musk was intoxicating. I was falling
under his spell. I moved closer to him, opening my mouth to take a sample but
he stopped me, shoving me back on the couch.
I lay back, pulling my tee shirt over my head. He slid my
trousers off my waist. With every spot he uncovered, he planted a kiss on my
flesh. My nipples and cock stiffened even more. My body was on fire and the
pain from my erection was more apparent. I tossed my shirt aside and Bryant
yanked my denims away, dropping them to the floor.
“Oooh Goooddd…Bryannnttt…” I moaned, gripping the back of
his neck. He rubbed his body against mine, pressing our cocks together, jerking
them repeatedly.
“Nathan…damn, you feel so good.” He stopped promptly before
moving upwards, hovering over my body. Bryant pressed his lips on top of mine.
His tongue settled in my mouth, laying it down for the count.
“Bryant, yes.” I wanted him inside me in the worst way but I
knew it wasn’t a great idea. I would settle for a more heated groping session
and maybe…
Before I could really think, he moved downward, resting his
head between my legs. His luscious lips were around the top of my cock.
Bryant’s tongue played with the foreskin, licking the pre-passion juice.
“Bryant…” I kept whispering his name while forcing him into
my crotch. He eagerly took my dick between his lips. It wasn’t perfect. I felt
his teeth on my skin, but it made it more pleasurable. Not bad for an amateur.
“Oohh shiiiittt…”
“Mhmm…” he groaned. Bryant sucked harder, fondling my balls.
My balls drew up against my body while all the fine hairs on
my arms and legs were standing on end. I wasn’t ready to cum. I pulled on his
shoulders, signaling him to stop. “Bryannt, please…”
He looked up at me before taking my lips again. “Nathan, I
been waiting for this.”
I had too but I wasn’t ready to go fully into sex just yet.
I only wanted some of the pleasure to happen now so when we knew each another
better, the actual act would be much hotter. I’d see just how much he cared
about being with me. Was he in a rush to have sex or did he really have the
intentions on being my man?
Was that cheating? Yes? Dirty? Absolutely. Especially since
he seemed more than hot for me at this point, but so was I. I was horny as hell
and here I was turning down a chance for him to take me to bed just because I
wanted him to prove how much he liked me. Sick, huh?
TY for having me on Blak! :D
ReplyDeletehahahahahahaha cock cock cock -- followed closely by shaft and rod lmao
ReplyDeleteGlad I could corrupt your brain some (*insert evil laugh* -- my work here is done) :P
LOL Yes it is K. Thanks for the idea!
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You're very welcome as always. It's my pleasure. Oh and I checked out that site - OMG I had no idea there were that many names for penis. :D
ReplyDeleteOMFG!!! You have made me laugh SOOOO much.
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